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Thursday, February 23, 2012

Bounded


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Set you free
But myself?
How to set ‘me’ free


Free of ‘love’ for you
stifling the hopes.
But to free myself….
Hope! Hopes against hope

Let you go,
to take your hand away.
But me, still waiting….
Staring, my hand in disbelief.


Close your heart,
ignore my pain.
But my heart ripped….
Bleeding, writhing for you.


Set you free
But
How to set ‘me’ free

12.44pm, 23/2/2012
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3 comments:

  1. DUSK-DRIZZLEFebruary 24, 2012 at 10:39 AM

    IT IS MY CHERISH YOU ALWAYS FREE

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  2. Rakesh KumarFebruary 27, 2012 at 4:45 PM

    How to set 'me' free,a good question.
    But who bounded you?
    You yourself,I think.
    So please try to set yourself free.

    Your poem is a beautiful emotional presentation.
    Thanks a lot,Preeti ji.

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  3. prritiy----snehFebruary 27, 2012 at 7:45 PM

    Thanks to all. Rakeshji thats what i wanted to say setting others free can be said...but..setting ''ourself'' free, free from affection..........No i can't do, I am not Saint........its impossible, today........

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