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Sunday, July 6, 2008

Why did you say I am beautiful

Why did you say I am beautiful?
This earth has but one graceful
Voice - sprinkling water, full of sweetness
Heart childlike full of tenderness

You said on my forehead does the sun rise

The sparkling stars twinkle in my eyes
Untied hair were the clouds floating
My words-honeyed, were ever enchanting

We were inseparable like scent and flowers
Into each other’s eyes we would gaze for hours
Life was sincere responsibility, still was fun
Come what may, from trouble we would not run

You said the faults were – often, majorly yours
To harmonize the relation – efforts, of course ours
Reasons superficial but galore you drifted
My silent words but no longer gifted

We, our being full of pain and longing
Still we couldn’t be each other’s belonging
The parting, an amicable solution be graceful

Still why did you say I am beautiful.

4 comments:

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  2. the poem is so romantic....
    it also shows the talent of the author ofcourse urs...

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  3. We, our being full of pain and longing
    Still we couldn’t be each other’s belonging
    The parting, an amicable solution be graceful
    Still why did you say I am beautiful....very nice ...

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